Songwriting!

I write songs in my free time. Tell me what you think of this one.

I'm just walking down the street
The street I used to own.
But now it's empty
like my heart
and it belongs to someone else.

Just walking down memory lane
Got my left hand on the cane
And my right one holds
The imaginary girl
That I fell so in love with.

And what do I say?
And what do I do?
She's looking at me, but I can't look back.
And nobody knows.
And nobody cares.
She's looking at me, but I just can't talk back.

(CHORUS)
Hey.
How're you doing?
Nothing Much.
I lost my touch
A long long time ago.
Hey.
How're you feeling?
Nothing's Up.
My time is almost up.

Or maybe I should just shut up.
(END CHORUS)

I'm just walking down the street
The street I used to know.
But now it's empty
like my soul
And I don't live here anymore.

Just walking down memory lane
Got my left hand on the cane
But I can't hold her
The imaginary girl
That I fell so in love with.

And what do I say?
And what do I do?
She's looking at me, but I just can't look back.
And nobody knows.
And nobody cares.
She's not angry, but I still feel so ill.

(CHORUS II)
Hey.
How're you doing?
Nothing Much.
I lost my touch
A long long time ago.
Hey.
What're you wearing?
Nothing's Up.
My question is null and void.
Hey.
How're you doing?
Nothing Much, you say
you lost your touch
a long long time ago.
Hey.
How're you feeling?
Nothing's Up.
The timeslot's almost up.

Or maybe I should just shut up.
(END CHORUS)

And what do I say?
And what do I do?
She's looking at me, but I just can't look back.
And nobody knows.
And nobody cares.
She's not angry, but I still feel so damned ill.
And what do I say?
And what do I do?
She's looking at me, her eyes of purest light.
And what do I know?
Should I start to cry?
She's looking at me, should I run for my life?

(CHORUS III)
Hey.
How're you doing?
Nothing Much.
I lost my touch
A long long time ago.
Hey.
How're you doing?
Nothing's Up.
That's what you say, I know.
Hey.
How're you doing?
Nothing Much, you say
I lost my touch
a long time ago.
Hey.
How're you feeling?
Nothing's Up.
Maybe I should just give up

Or maybe I should just shut up.
maybe I should just shut up.
maybe I should just shut up.
maybe I should just shut up.
maybe I should just shut up.
Oh, world, please shut up.
(END CHORUS)

you used to own a street?

Another song.

She says that she's glad for me.
But
I know, I know, I know that she's lying.
She says that she'll be there for me.
But
I know, I know, I know, she's not even trying.

And so I stare
out to the sky
And watch as time
just passes by.
It feels so warm
But she's so cold.
All that glitters
is not gold...

(CHORUS)
She's never there
She's never real
She's just a dream
But
I'll be damned, cuz I think I'm in love.
She isn't real
It's just a trick
It's just my paranoia
But
I'll be damned, I think I'm in love.
(CHORUS END)

She says that she'll be nice to me.
But
I know, I know, I know that she's not here.
She says that she'll make out with me.
But
I know, I know, I know, she's just what I feared...

And so I stare
out to the sea
Why wont my mind
just leave me be
It feels so warm
But she's so cold.
All that glitters
is not gold...

(CHORUS II)
She's never there
She's never real
She's just a dream
But
I'll be damned, I think I'm in love.
She isn't real
It's just a trick
It's just my paranoia
But
I'll be damned, cuz I'm in love.
With my mind
(CHORUS END)

The love is burning
Not like fire, but like cigars
Polluting my mind
With flights of fancy all the time.
The love is searing
Like my arm on the stovetop
I'm burning
burning
burning
like a frickin' Zippo Lighter
and I swear
It feels so warm
But she's so cold.
All that glitters
is not gold...
It is not gold!

(CHORUS III)
She's never there
She's never real
She's just a dream
But
I'll be damned, I think I'm in love.
She isn't real
It's just a trick
It's just my paranoia
But
I'll be damned, cuz I'm in love.
I'm in love.
She's never there
She's never real
She's just a dream
But
I'll be damned, I think I'm in love.
She isn't real
It's just a trick
It's just my paranoia
But
I'll be damned, cuz I'm in love.
With my mind
(CHORUS END)

(Background repeats Chorus)
I'm so in love.
I'm so in love.
I'm so in love.
I'm so in love.

Just leave me to burn...

Looks like Coldplay mixed with some sort of rap?

LOL YOU SHOULD TOTALLY SING IT

Goodness. I know a ton of people who write songs now. o.O

Those are really good!